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Enough isn't always enough
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Enough isn't always enough |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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I thought of you the other day thought about our first date the charming way you'd say my name how you knew i felt the same what became of that love? the one we thought was sent from up above the scars are fresh, some still open waiting to heal...yet still hoping that our love will find a way waiting to tell you what I dare not say for the damage is done our hearts can take no more lest their left bleeding on the floor so now enveloped in fear i hold you close, shed a tear i know that soon you'll board that plane and miles away you'll remain... alone i'll struggle day in day out and wonder what all the fighting really was about.. the life you gave me, a faded memory I wanted for nothing, was so blind I didn't see I had it all, still wanting more yet still i walked out the door have me back I know you would go back I just don't think I could the good times remain locked deep in my heart now is the time for a fresh start I hope i've learned from the mistakes of the past next time around I will make it last.... Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The pain can be so intense I often wonder why we yearn for the opportunity to create it again. Oh yeah...the pleasure is what we are really after,(I almost forgot.) Hang in there and I hope things are better now or soon get better for you. Enjoyed the poem.  |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
It seems like this road is familiar to both of us and I can identify with what you are saying completely. What did Richard Bach say: "There is no such thing as a problem , without a gift for you in its hands, You seek problems because you need their gifts" I feel love is pretty much the same Loved your poem and felt every line Olias |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Those feelings the ones noone ever wants to feel , if only we could only feel the good ones and vanish the bad ones forever I guess one day it will happen the perfect love the one who is ment for us if there is any such thing, great poem |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Julie~ this was so heartfelt and moved me completely! One of your strongest pieces to date. I loved the depth and variation of emotion you put into this one. I can tell it's truly from the heart...ranging from sadness to confusion to determination. Excellent! Take care. Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you so muh your kind words all of you, it is nice to know there are people out there with understanding....Thank you again. Julie :) |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written and expressed. Enjoyed your poem. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Enjoyed this one plenty... JulieAnn, very strong emotions you have expressed here... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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