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LoveBug
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0 posted 2000-06-23 01:19 AM


It is only a matter of time
Before we all take charge
But in the meantime, we will settle
For capturing your Marge!

It wasn't hard to lure her in
We just got some hot boys
And promised her she could keep them
As her own personal toys!

She started to drool as she walked up
To collect her prize
We chained her up... it isn't our fault
That she believed our lies!

The lovely krytonite necklace
Competes her outfit so hip
We feed her sprite, and cackle
As she takes the first sip

Old man Chris offended my car
That's when it became war
You will all feel the wrath now
You thought it was bad before???

HA!



It's only just begun!

BWAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!

VIVA LA VOLKSWAGENIA!!!!


"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-06-23 01:25 AM


(HIGH FIVE FOR MY FELLOW WORLD DOMINATOR)

You're a genius my friend!  And the kryptonite necklace, a nice touch! Well, now, maybe we should offer a randsom for Marge?  Say, control of the forums in exchange for her? BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! *runs off to put Marge with Poet deVine so the two of them can listen to NSYNC together*


*Krista Knutson*

"Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~


"We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~

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2 posted 2000-06-23 01:35 AM


So can I watch from behind your lines....
I love bugs too. I could infiltrate their camp for ya, cause they consider me a grownup...

Parker Spy service

Wonder Woman
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3 posted 2000-06-23 02:50 AM


Okay, teens
You've declared a dream
the takeover of
this Poetry Queen !

I can be friend
or I can be foe ...
just how far
will you go ?

I'll also help
PoetdeVine
and Christopher
if he's inclined.

Wonder Woman
has come to play ...
but .. NO ! Oh, NO !
Don't make me stay !

Have your fun
and when you're through
let's see if this world
is ready for you !

Wonder Woman !
Wonder Woman !

angelswing
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4 posted 2000-06-23 05:08 AM


A fantasticly, revolutionary poem, but little do you know that I will be there when the smoke has cleared to pick up the peases of an already swaying people and unite them as one under my banner - the banner of love . BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA ... HAHAHA ... Sorry I got a little obsesesed for a moment there by the possibility of a truly equaly treated state, although this can never be possible - I can still dream ... can't I ? Loved the poem, but the revelution needs a lot more planning, I'll put myself forward as the posistion of arch tactition . And confessor of sins .
L.of.L. Tom .
  

Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

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5 posted 2000-06-23 05:13 AM


Sorry I forgot to say that was a great entrance wounder woman, you sure made I few heads turn . We could use an operative of your skill as a reconaisance commander for top secret missions as in MI5, but don't leave your laptop on a park bench please !!!
L.of.L. Tom .


Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

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6 posted 2000-06-23 08:39 PM




Marge (aka Wonder Woman)
is making my head ache
she has all these plans
for the tower she will take

She's got me digging a tunnel
under the fortress wall
but how am I to do this
my spoon is really small

At this rate I'll be out
when I'm a hundred and two
but still I keep digging
"Marge! throw me another Dew!"


[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 06-23-2000).]

Wonder Woman
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7 posted 2000-06-23 09:22 PM



Shhhhhh !
Here's your 'DEW'
They'll never figure it out !
Larger 'SPOON' on the way !
These little 'PUNKS' will never keep us !
SuperMan is here to tunnel
and with this 'DYNAMIC DUO'
we'll have you out of here in no time flat !
Remember the 'code'
Just 'DEW'it !

WONDER WOMAN !!
WONDER WOMAN !!


Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2000-06-23 09:53 PM


      Go Wonder Woman Go!!!      
Poet deVine
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9 posted 2000-06-23 10:21 PM


Hold the DEW!! When you say have me out in 'no time' flat..do you mean I'll be FLAT? I don't want to be flat!!! I'll have to have weights to hold me down when I walk in the wind!! Ah, but I could slide under doors easier..ok..make me flat...
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10 posted 2000-06-23 11:11 PM


Well, we just have to do something about that...

*Abe enters in his construction worker suit, with Alwye close behind, drooling. Abe pours concrete all around the cell*

BWAHAHHAA
VIVA LA VOLKSWAGEN!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Elizabeth
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11 posted 2000-06-24 11:51 AM


GO WONDER WOMAN!!!!! I'm right behind you!

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



brian madden
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12 posted 2000-06-24 02:54 PM


BEWARE THE WRATH OF MARGE.

I pity you teens, so you have captured our poetry Queen?
little do you know that though she sings a beautiful verse
she is a lean, mean fighting machine.
She armed to the teeth with passion power.
she can handle endless Britney, back street and the rest of that trashy noise.
She shall turn your revolution sour.
Now settle your homones and go back to playing with your toys.
leave the revolution and power to us,
stop kidnapping our people and causing such a fuss.

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral.
Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

ESP
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13 posted 2000-06-24 04:26 PM


LOL at the lot of you!!
Great poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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