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Fly With Me |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
With every beat of my heart With every breathe that I take This love grows. With every word that we speak With every kiss that we share This love grows. I refuse to deny This feeling building inside So watch as it grows. Take my hand, fly with me Just watch as love sets us free And lets let it grow. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Nice poem here,,,,,isn't love grand??? If you have it guard it with your life!  Julie :) |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful poem , I agree with Julie if you have true love guard it keep it safe  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful thoughts...expressed well some things cant be denied welcome to passions Paula so very nice to meet you take care, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving (How one move just puts me by myself) There you go just trusting someone else (Now I know I put us both through hell) ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong (I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me) And I'm not sayin (We ever had the right to hold on) (I just didn't wanna let you get away from me) ~MB20~ She says baby, It's 3AM ... I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. ~MB20~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Thanks for all your kind words. Its so very nice to have a place to write without fear censure. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Paula~ Yet another beautiful poem of love penned by you. I am very impressed. There are many wonders in this world that gives the heart delight, but, none as beautiful, magical and fulfilling as love. It really does set you free! Your poem reiterates that perfectly! After reading "Chance The Wind" and this piece it tells me that you must be in love, and I am happy for you! You go girl! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful, Paula!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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