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Star Struck |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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I gazed upon the stars tonight they gazed back at me twinkleing their star struck eyes as if asking me to join them in the skies for a moment in total bliss I accepted their offer lieing back and floating through a dream awake they showed me heavenly beauty like none i've ever seen the colors surrounded me a whirl i was in like a keliedoscope i began to spin then someone grabbed my hand pulled me out of my reverie why oh why I ask couldn't they just let me be reality once agian upon me I look up in the sky I thought I saw one wink as I waved g'bye..... Julie :) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very nice JA... yes there is something so poetic and magical about the stars... creative and cool poem loved the ending jm |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
What a lovely poem, I love the stars they are so inspirational  Great poem [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 06-22-2000).] |
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