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The letter |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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I found a letter under my door today a letter with the words I always longed for you to say unspoken sentences as i read the lines they weave through my mind just like a vine words of love and laughter of happiness ever after addressed to noone....could it be mine?? i look to see who it is from it is signed "Your only love....." must have been misplaced for a lady he truely loves so I put it in a bottle and through it in the sea for I know that letter could not have been for me....... Julie :) |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is very good though it has an air of sadness  Wonderful poem Julie  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, a bit sad but beautifully done! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sigh* i know, i know... whistful and wishful... beautiful poem JA ... one day it will say our name ... take care, jm |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Julie Ann, So sad, but sweet in a lot of ways. I am with JM, one day it will say your name. Hang in there!! Nice writing. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A knife to the heart, this one is one of my favorites from you~ thank you for sharing it. btw, I reposted "I waited..." for you, it's in open 8 somewhere Take care Julie a rainbow will come~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
there is always tomorrow... and love always finds you...no matter how hard you look the other way |
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