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Genesis Evermore.................Under Repairs ......Please don't post

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

0 posted 2000-06-22 05:42 PM

Do to the fact that my muse can not spell and is experiencing technical difficulties, I am temperarily removing this poem.

I shall discuss this further with her and straighten the this matter out as soon as possible.

This is not a test......I repeat this not a test of the American broadcast system. LOL

Thanks,
Marina

[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 06-23-2000).]

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-06-22 06:28 PM

Years gone and times changed
In the garden they had always grown
Their proof of unity, never estranged
A heart to call their own

10 years since he departed
The garden no longer blooms
Just a reminder of how it got started
Stretching beyond tomb

Their anniversary, a day she holds dear
Today it will blossom like never before
Through the realms, one message is clear
Soul mates are eternal genius evermore

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VERY VERY COOL MARINA-GIRL---VERY!!!!!!
creative and well written ...
love the premise of this...
soulmates indeed
later-cool-poetess-gator
jm

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

2 posted 2000-06-22 09:05 PM

Thanks Jan!

[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 06-22-2000).]

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-06-23 01:37 AM

Marina,
it's funny isn't it how soulmates can know each other. . . even before and after they've come here. . . you've really captured that in this poem. . .

Excellent my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

4 posted 2000-06-23 07:16 AM

Marina, this is an excellent heart-felt theme and you have written a beautiful ode to that theme... I really enjoyed this one.

Through the realms, one message is clear
Soul mates are eternal genius evermore

What lines!!! Thank You...

regards, sudhir

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

5 posted 2000-06-23 02:43 PM

Thank you Sven and Sudhir. I am glad you got as much out of it as I tried to put into it.

Marina

It is blessing to have wings for your words, and passion to flow from pen.

Marina Crossley

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-06-23 03:53 PM

Marina this is a very touching message that goes right to the heart. James

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2000-06-23 04:02 PM

Wonderful story of romance, beginning to end and back again as soul mates ... beautiful sentiments Marina!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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