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In my reverie
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In my reverie |
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Alexander Duke Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 12 |
In my reverie In my reverie I, the lover love so gently with a steady touch In my night I am the prey of a thousand killings visted on me each day In my memories I am the scorned the child victim that the world abondoned For my future I wish to inherit riches in a time thats still unclear But for my today I am not here life wasn't so cool I long since moved elsewhere |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to Passions! A sad tale you tell today sir. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special message.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So much feeling of sadness and desolation...with a touch of tender...well done emotional piece. Welcome! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions! This is a very sad piece, well written. Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Welcome to Passions! Interesting and mysterious poem. Corinne |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Welcome to passions , This is a very sad poem thanks for sharing it with us  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to Passions!! Wonderful poem....full of mystery....had to read it twice. Great writing!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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