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On Silent Tongue
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On Silent Tongue |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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On Silent Tongue Words, How they linger... Mingle with my thoughts. An emotion I cannot express Holds fast with my heart. Watching you Walk in and out my life, Making me cling to these words... Afraid to speak my mind, Afraid of the return. If only one day I could release what I feel... Make you see what is true, But I cannot, As my words fall in silence. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I know it's hard but it's the only answer, speak your mind and get it out. I know you may be afraid of losing what you already have but what do you have if you're not happy?? Very nice poem! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Long time no see Marie, Great poem, the way you describe the fear of being alone (at least that's what I got from this) is truly astounding  All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hi marie, nice to see a post from you again this is a sad, emotional, but beautiful poem well expressed emotions... I really like the title ... while our words my fail verbally a poet always has a voice... our poets pen may speak for us take care jm |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written.. enjoyed. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Some words do not come easy. Very well written LIz |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marie, Great poem. I hope that you find the words to let him know how you feel. You may be surprised. Best wishes to you!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Ethome: Nice thoughts, but this isn't personal...just a poem. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Jeffrey: Yes, long time no see! Thanks for your comment, but it's about being afraid to speak your mind.  JM: Great sentiments as well. Thanks you Mike: Thanks Liz: Wow...thanks for reading and your comment. You know I htink you and Marge are awesome  LW: Nice comment, but it's not a personal issue with me. I always speak my mind...gets me in trouble, too. Thanks!Marie~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi my twin This was touching, lonely and sad. You have expressed in this how alot of us feel from time to time and our poetry is a way to help us to express the words we cannot actually come out and say...Well done sis Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ My this is just wonderful. I've enjoyed so much of what you write. Hope to see you here more hon. The title drew me in and then you 'spoke' the silence so well. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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