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JulieAnn
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0 posted 2000-06-22 02:21 PM



you catch my eye from accross the smoked filled room
I look away quickly, it is just too soon
on the rebound is not my style
so I try not to notice your smile
i caught you staring at me again
try to understand, I just need a friend
someone to share, all my hopes and fears
someone to wipe away all of my tears
someone to listen while I heal
caring about how I feel
romance screws everything up
intamacy will only overfill our cup
so please tell me you'll accept my terms
before we open this large can of worms
i fall too easily...but it is too soon
let me find myself, dancing to my own tune
and if after our friendship grows
maybe then....who knows???


Julie :)



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1 posted 2000-06-22 02:24 PM


That's right, Julie! Take it slow, and don't ruin any chance of a good relationship by going too fast.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-06-22 02:31 PM


very wise, JA..
cool poem...
and if you know the secret of HOW NOT TO FALL
too soon...
write me poem hon or Email me-cause Ive NO CLUE  
great poem...sweet and tender emotions
take care, jm

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