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miriam
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since 1999-08-26
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0 posted 2000-06-22 02:02 PM


We did each other wrong,
But you were always so strong.
You never cried a tear,
At least not when I was near.

I think that's why I hated you,
Because you always knew,
That even though you did me wrong,
Without you I couldn't stay for long.

I tried to make you stay,
By changing my own way.
It was a mistake,
You were nothing but a fake.

You said you loved me so,
That I gues I'll never know.
You tried to treat me right,
But still, we always fight.

Now I'm in pain,
Because my heart has a stain.
I know that all this is true,
There's nothing else for me to do.

Tonight I wish on a star,
I wish you wouldn't be so far.
I wish you would change your ways,
Try to come home someday.

I know that's too much to wish for,
Although I would never wish for anymore.
And even now that were apart,
You're still the owner of my heart.

And as I close this,
Know it's you I'll miss.
You showed me a part of life I never knew,
I'll never experience it again unless with you.

Maybe I'm not doing what's right,
But it's just that I can't be with fright!
I need to show you where I stand,
And it's not trapped inside your hand.

I won't say good-bye,
Good-bye's are forever.
I'll say see you later,
Maybe destiny will put us back together.

~~~I love you David Monge~~~




miriam coronado



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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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1 posted 2000-06-22 02:09 PM


Very good feeling shining through here...love hurts.....we have all been there.
I hope it all works out.  

Julie :)



miriam
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
2 posted 2000-06-22 02:16 PM


isn't the healing process always the worst??? I hate it!! I'll be okay though.  thanks for your reply JulieAnn.

miriam coronado



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