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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-06-22 01:46 PM


Acrostic for Two Decades

A special day
Nuances fulfilled, a
New decade to face ~
Inconquerable
Vistas of
Emerging sheen ~
Radiant, under
Starshine which
Arrays our memories, to
Reign together with
You

Wondrous soulmate
And
Loving spirit, with
Truly a
Zest for life.

Happy Anniversary to my Soul’s Mate…

21 June 2000
©KRJ



© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-22 01:50 PM


Congratulations, Sunshine! May you have many more happy years and many, many more beautiful poems.

Elizabeth


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I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



ethome
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2 posted 2000-06-22 01:52 PM


Well acrostic Sunshine. Happy anniversary waltz to you and your soulmate. Twenty years is a good long time, you should be proud. Very nice touch on that poem.
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3 posted 2000-06-22 01:55 PM


Thank you Elizabeth, and Ethome... for the first time, I really had to work at a piece. Do you know how difficult it is to find a "Z" word? And Zorro, he ain't!

Elizabeth, I will do my best to provide more "beautiful" poems...thank you...

Ethome, this marriage has only seemed like 20 minutes...the way it should be...thank you!

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


ethome
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4 posted 2000-06-22 04:41 PM


I can't understand why you don't get more responses this is a very special time and deserves recognition from all of us. We all should be so lucky!
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5 posted 2000-06-22 04:47 PM


Ethome, thank you...perhaps because anyone who does read my work is still AT work...LOL! Perhaps later...

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 2000-06-22 04:54 PM


Wondrous soulmate
And
Loving spirit, with
Truly a
Zest for life.
.....
Heart-felt Congratulations for your Aniversary.... nad wish you many more such happy 'Zestful' occasions...a wonderful poem this one....

looking for the Z words are you...lemme yelp...

zeal, (enthusiasm)
zeppelin, (actually is a hot-air balloon I cud uze it az 'lift')
zero (don't use this reserve this for me...all copyrights with me for using on myself...ha ha )
zilch (means 'nothing' again property of sudhir for self-usage)

thats enough fooling around...  

Regards, sudhir



[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-22-2000).]

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7 posted 2000-06-22 04:56 PM


Wondrous soulmate
And
Loving spirit, with
Truly a
Zest for life.
.....

Heart-felt Congratulations for your Aniversary.... nad wish you many more such happy 'Zestful' occasions...a wonderful poem this one....

looking for the Z words are you...lemme yelp...

zeal, (enthusiasm)
zeppelin, (actually is a hot-air balloon I cud uze it az 'lift')
zero (don't use this reserve this for me...all copyrights with me for using on myself...ha ha )
zilch (means 'nothing' again property of sudhir for self-usage)

thats enough fooling around...  

Regards, sudhir


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8 posted 2000-06-22 05:07 PM


Sudhir, LOL at you, and with you!

zag
zig
zany
zap
zealot [possibly could have used that...]
zealous
zeal
zebra
Zeitgeist
zenith [now, there's a word I should have thought of

zephyr [I could have put that in there, somehow]

Zeus (?)[nah...]

next time I create a piece, I will have to have my books beside me, last night I was without...

Thanks for the double chuckles from the double post...



Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


Colin
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9 posted 2000-06-22 05:43 PM


Congratulations on the poem and, of course, the twenty years  

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

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10 posted 2000-06-22 05:48 PM


Eric, {~,^} thank you!

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2000-06-22 06:33 PM


Wonderful anniversary poem Sunshine ... and Happy 20th to you both!  We're working on 17 now ... amazing how time flies when you have your soul mate!  

Best wishes and congratulations,
/Kit

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12 posted 2000-06-22 08:40 PM


Happy Anniversary! This is very beautiful, Sunshine!

Denise

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Kit, work it is, good things don't come easy...

denise, thank you very much!...

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


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14 posted 2000-07-03 02:26 AM


Belated CONGRATS and may you have many more 20 years to come

SUNSHINE

Sparkling
Untarnished,
New-born
Sun's
Halo
Innocently
Nourishes
Enthusiasm

tracie66
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15 posted 2000-07-03 04:09 AM


a most delightfully beautiful acrostic sunshine..loved it  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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16 posted 2000-07-03 07:51 AM


Karilea~
How DID I miss this little jewel ???
Well ... sure glad I got to see it.
Great job, gal ....
on the marriage AND the poem !
~*Marge*~


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17 posted 2000-07-04 11:11 AM


Kaile, I LOVE it, thank you!

tracie, thanks, little one!

Marge, it is ALL worthwhile, thanks!

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