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OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

0 posted 2000-06-22 12:40 PM


For Melissa and all who toil

We mine papers, white,
Digging with pens to reveal,
The gems that are there,

Olias


© Copyright 2000 Mick Yates - All Rights Reserved
Jan
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 114

1 posted 2000-06-22 12:52 PM


You are doing great with these!
Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2000-06-22 02:39 PM



Wow Olias, now this is such a well written haiku, it blew me away, you have the talent for these, they are all "gems."!  Keep writing them and I'll keep praising you!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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