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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-06-22 08:00 AM




Until Wishes Come True
~*Marge Tindal*~

If all of the things
I wished for
yesterday
came true
today
I'd have you
to look forward to
tomorrow

But until
wishes come true
I'll hold myself
in slumber
dreaming
of you





© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2000-06-22 08:04 AM


Marge,
This is as beautiful as you are. *L*

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2 posted 2000-06-22 08:18 AM


Seymour~
Kisses to you this morning.
And YOU my friend ... had better
get some entries into the BOOK !
That's an order ! !
~*Major Marge*~



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OLIAS
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3 posted 2000-06-22 11:15 AM


These fourteen lines speak more to me than a library of verse, Thankyou for sharing this

Olias

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4 posted 2000-06-22 11:23 AM


luvit luvit luvit luvit...

ohyouknowiluvit.....jeskeepemcomin

lol.

Did I mention I love this one???


chris


Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



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5 posted 2000-06-22 11:47 AM


Marge very romantic , sweet, and pink!!!

LOVE IT TOO!!!

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6 posted 2000-06-22 12:02 PM


Yes....very pink!!
Not just in colour but in words....wonderful!


Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you!

Jan
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7 posted 2000-06-22 12:56 PM


You are wonderful!

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8 posted 2000-06-22 01:08 PM


That's the beauty of wishes Marge - we get to wish them over and over and you know it's fun wishing them! Great arrangement of words to make such romantic appeal.
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9 posted 2000-06-22 01:51 PM


Oh Marge, forgive me, can't help myself...

If wishes were horses and beggars would ride...
then I would have you at my side...

See what you did?

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


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10 posted 2000-06-22 01:56 PM


Marge~ *SIGH*   this is so romantic! just love it!   -SEA

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11 posted 2000-06-22 02:28 PM


Marge, you don't know how much I can relate to this. May all your wishes come true!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

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12 posted 2000-06-22 02:33 PM


Loved it!! Great work as always....I almost get excited when I see one of your poems because I enjoy reading them so much.....you say so much with just a few words so well.  

Julie :)



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13 posted 2000-06-22 03:24 PM


This is wondeful, Marge!
Short and tender...all the right stuff!
Marie~

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14 posted 2000-06-22 07:23 PM


Olias~
Thank YOU for the niceties !

ChrisG~
You're so cute !
If you 'luvit' - I 'luvit' !

RomanticHeart~
I think 'romance' may be my middle name !

NotLikely2~
Well, I'm just 'in the pink' of things.
Thanks.

Jan~
And you are sweet to think so.  Thank you.

ETHome~
Thanks, hon.  Wishes are so romantic, aren't they?

Karilea~
LOL !  Glad to get you on a horse !  

SEA~
You are as terminally romantic as I am -
Stay that way !

LoveBug~
Yeah, I think I do know, young lady -
and I'm glad !

JulieAnn~
What a super sweet comment.
Gosh, I do thank you.

Mariee~
Love seeing your reply, my friend.

*Thanks to all for liking this little 'wish'.
Love to each of you for your sweet responses.
~*Marge*~


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15 posted 2000-06-22 08:18 PM


short and sweet, Marge!

Corinne

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16 posted 2000-06-22 08:24 PM


Whoa!!!

How did I miss this one?

Marge, You certainly come up with the most beautiful words WOW!!!

p.s. You still ROCK!

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep



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17 posted 2000-06-22 08:29 PM


Beautiful, Marge! So beautiful!

Denise

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18 posted 2000-06-22 09:00 PM


Hi Marge,

Wonderful, I would be flying higher than a rainbow if that could happen. Awesome writing here as always.

Love,  Cerenity

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19 posted 2000-06-22 11:19 PM


Marge~

This was lovely my friend.  If only those wishes could come true...  Perfect words to express a wonderful hope for the future.  
Great writing gal!!

LW


Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith


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20 posted 2000-06-22 11:24 PM


So when do I get to hold yourself in slumber, Marge  ? Yesterday, you say? Darn! Missed out again

In order to keep a true perspective of one's importance, everyone should have a dog that will worship him and a cat that will ignore him.

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21 posted 2000-06-23 12:20 PM


Was wishing I was going to find a wonderful poem when I clicked on your name....  voila..
but then...  didn't have to wish too hard...
enjoyed muchly.

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22 posted 2000-06-23 08:02 AM


Corinne~
Thanks for the 'sweet'.

Jeffrey~
Awww !  You're still 'sweet'.

Denise~
You are one 'beautiful' soul.

Cerenity~
My friend, keep wishing !

LoneWolf~
Glad you also caught the 'hope'.

Balladeer~
Day late ... *hug* short.  
Darn it anyway !

Mike~
Awwwww !  Thank you.

~*Marge*~


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23 posted 2000-06-23 11:36 AM


Nice poem
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24 posted 2000-06-23 12:07 PM


If wishes and dreams ever come true,
My first wish and dream will be
To go and see you!!!

This is a lovely poem, Marge!! Love ya!

Love and hugs,
Lil' Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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25 posted 2000-06-23 02:05 PM


VanDana~
You're so sweet.  Thanks, hon.

Oh, Lil' Lizzie~
You brought tears to this lady's eyes -
How delightful the very thought of seeing you would be.  Maybe someday ...
I value your friendship so much.
Thank you for being YOU !
Love ya' to pieces.
~*Marge*~


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26 posted 2000-06-23 02:48 PM


Sigh ... I wish I could wish my muse was as energetic and talented as yours Marge?    (closing eyes ... wishing ... wishing) sigh ... Wonderful poem Marge, truly delightful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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27 posted 2000-06-23 06:55 PM


Kit~
Hon ... I appreciate the responses to this simple little wish poem.
I am apparently blessed with at least one of my muses who loves a sweet love song.
Thanks for such a nice comment.
~*Marge*~


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28 posted 2000-06-23 08:26 PM


Marge--Awe Marge---there you go again getting mushy...where do you get all that love inspiration?  Oh, great poem!
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29 posted 2000-06-23 11:00 PM


Gosh, Marge, this is a real beauty...this in MHO definitely deserves to be in the book
this sweet anticipation for a brighter future...Love it! who says waiting for your someone must be a miserable wait?

going to check out your poetry more often,Marge..Register me as a member of your fan club!


I DO

Saying "I Do" with pride today
Interwining our hearts for a brighter tomorrow

I feel blessed--
the sparrows in my heart
will never stop chirping now

Only bemoaning that
Why didn't i get to know
YOU
yesterday?

for you, Marge...you inspired me

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30 posted 2000-06-24 08:57 AM


Martie~
Why, hon ... it's just in my little heart.
Thanks, gal.

Kaile~
What sweet thoughts.  
Thank you for the little inspired piece.
~*Marge*~


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31 posted 2000-06-24 09:54 AM


Pictures may be worth a thousand words but these few words paint a thousand pictures...


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32 posted 2000-06-24 12:29 PM


I have similar wishes Marge. I hope yours come true swiftly   A lovely poem.

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

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33 posted 2000-06-24 12:36 PM


BrettMartinSmith~
Thank you so much for the lovely comment.

Eric~
So nice of you to reply.
May your wishes come true !
Thank you very much for the kind thoughts.
~*Marge*~
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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com             




[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 06-24-2000).]

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34 posted 2000-06-24 01:54 PM


But until
wishes come true
I'll hold myself
in slumber
dreaming
of you

Marge keep wishing, you never know and keep writing, beautiful poem.

A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral.
Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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35 posted 2000-06-24 06:52 PM


Lovely poem and I will definitely be looking for more of your works.  As for the dreams and all those waiting -- All I can say is never give up hope they can come true;  even if it takes 26 years or so.  I know!!!!
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36 posted 2000-06-25 10:08 AM



Another lovely poem, Marge!  Loved it!!

~Lorraine


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37 posted 2000-06-25 10:48 AM


BrianM~
Thanks, hon.  We all keep 'wishing'.

MarkB~
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.

Lorraine~
So pleased that you enjoyed it, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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38 posted 2000-06-25 11:29 AM


Such a dear little poem
with sentiment, Grand,
from forth your sweet heart
and inscribed by kind hand

Wonderfully writ, my friend!

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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39 posted 2000-06-25 06:43 PM


Claire~
Thank you for such a sweet reply.
I guess I underestimated this one -
I'm caught in sweet surprise at the replies.

Thanks for the poetic response.
Love ya, gal.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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