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DestinysCharm
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since 2000-04-28
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0 posted 2000-06-22 07:16 AM


The Image of Your Lips

They caught me
floating away
on a star
far removed
from day,
in the grasp
of a momentary eclipse
my mind saw
the image of your lips.

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-06-22 07:22 AM


Lovely daydreaming image Destiny's Charm! Well done.

Best wishes,
/Kit

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
2 posted 2000-06-22 11:24 AM


This is great, I love the line "In the grasp of a momentary eclipse", you have a wonderful style, good work and thankyou
Olias

Denise
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3 posted 2000-06-22 08:53 PM


This is lovely! Soft daydreamy quality to it!  

Denise

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