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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 2000-06-22 01:23 AM


Well now that summer's here, we're all expecting a little rest.
But NO, trouble's brewing in the form of childish jests.

It seems that Passions' babies have had too much caffeine.
Runnin' 'round like tiny ants, boasting grande ol' dreams.

Alwye and that other chick (I think her name is 'Roach,')
Have claimed to rule the world, with themselves beyond reproach.

Seems they've got my little friend (yeah, the short one, Mr. Abe,)
Following with lolling tongue at the 'promises' they've made.

And there's Novacainewhosit, a faithless mercenary
Willing to join with the 'winning' side with attitude quite contrary.

And it really didn't matter, these minds in grand delusion.
We smiled as we watched them walk around in daft illusions!

But now they've gone and done it, they've captured Ms. Devine!
Tortured her with... uh... 'music?' They're really most unkind.

And it didn't even stop there, no that wasn't quite enough.
They also captured Janet Marie, and are treating her quite rough!

A shame it is to say the least, these kids with no respect
For the founders of their second home. And do you think they give a... umm... heck?

No, they're thoughtless and so rude, four wheels on the brain.
And if they think that "bugs" are cool, they're really quite insane!

"Pregnant Rollerskates" they are, with a little bitty engine.
Put all four adolescents in it, and it wouldn't move an inch!

But, sigh, they've had to spoil the fun and think they are the "bomb."
So I and the other grownups, will have to show them their wrong.

Teach them to respect us, to be humble and obey.
Make them do their homework, before they go out and play!

So gather 'round all Superfriends, let's show them what we've got.
For these unmolded youngsters... well "in charge," I know they're not!







© Copyright 2000 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2000-06-22 01:28 AM


HEHEHEHE  I like this, way to go Chris!!
sorry Krista hehehe

Alwye
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2 posted 2000-06-22 01:33 AM


Oh you think so, do you Mister?  Oh, and even calling me a Brat on top of it...seems you're the one with the maturity problems.   We're simply bent on World Domination.  And we will have our ways....plans are being made as you sit unsuspecting, dear Chrissy.  Watch your back....we're comin...with evil, twisted pop music groups, fast food, and a whole mess of teenage mutant NINJA TEENS!  *sending LoveBug to tip over your wheel chair*

VIVA LA VOLKSWAGENIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

COME ON ALL TEENS, LET'S SHOW THE ADULTS WHAT WE'VE GOT!

*grins and walks back to hideout to plan our next attack*



*Krista Knutson*

"Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~


"We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~

Christopher
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3 posted 2000-06-22 01:39 AM


Sigh, it's ok Krista, calm down... (someone get this poor, deluded child some Prozac please...)

Mommy's coming soon to take you home...

Alwye
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4 posted 2000-06-22 01:41 AM


Oh, I love how you underestimate me Chris..it makes things soo much easier...

*Krista Knutson*

"Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~


"We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~

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5 posted 2000-06-22 01:54 AM


*sits silently meditating in his corner with his shining katana layed across his lap, having learned long ago to ignore empty taunts and to face each enemy's blade with the full, brutal force of his own*
Christopher
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6 posted 2000-06-22 02:06 AM


That's cool!

Novacaine bought himself one of those plastic swords from Toys 'R' Us!!!

(Does your mom know you have it? She doesn't like you playing around with weapons you know...)

Novacaine For The Soul
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7 posted 2000-06-22 02:13 AM


. . . . . . . . *lost in meditation over the upcoming battle* . . . . . . . . .
Severn
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8 posted 2000-06-22 05:05 AM


Hmmmmmmmmmmm....now who do I side with here?

Perhaps I will maintain a mature, reserved distance...

snort....

K

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9 posted 2000-06-22 06:27 AM


WELL!!
Here's another cheer for the "Oldies"
I'm ready for the battle...........
......been out practising my Origami all night.........eeeeeeeeeeeeeooooooouuuuuuuuuwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Really...you kids should know better...when WILL you grow up?)

Poet deVine
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10 posted 2000-06-22 09:33 AM


God help us if Origami is all we've got!!! LOL

BTW....Superman(aka Chris) has me worred..see the Teen forum post..

Elizabeth
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11 posted 2000-06-22 11:56 AM


Look out little ones! Batgirl is here to join the ranks of Superman, Wonder Woman, and the rest! No wonder Janet Marie is having trouble with her Muse-you've got her incarcerated with that noise blaring constantly. Poor PdV and JM-just hang in there.

*sigh* You children just don't know what you're up against...

Elizabeth
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I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!






[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 06-22-2000).]

Sigmund Freud
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12 posted 2000-06-22 02:41 PM


Freud here, please understand these little one's are just having a problem dealing with their own Origami's. When they reach adulthood and can control their own Origami's they will know the real power in the world. Take my cigar for instance.....


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13 posted 2000-06-22 02:52 PM


Roach? Roach? ROACH??????

Pregnant Rollerskates? Pregnant Rollerskates PREGNANT ROLLERSKATES???

Old man, you've gone too far! You can offend my friend, my name, anything you want, but you DO NOT offend anything bearing the proud name of Volkswagen!!!! Let me tell you, this bug is mad, and I have one nasty bite!



150 horses coming your way!!

*knocks over old man Chris's wheelchair*

Oh, and another comment for old man Chris- Who's gonna feed you your fiber suppliments and change your dipers in a few years? Well, it's not going to be me!


VIVA LA VOLKSWAGENIA!!!!< !signature-->

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea


[This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 06-22-2000).]

Christopher
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14 posted 2000-06-22 03:27 PM


FARFRUMGRUVEN

Poet deVine
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15 posted 2000-06-22 03:48 PM


Please go to Prose and read about the recapture of my perfect self...LOL
JP
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16 posted 2000-06-22 04:03 PM


I was just browsing through the forums and was thinking to myself "Self, you should visit the Teen Forum, you've never been there, so why don't you go take a look?"

I was about to pop over when this thread showed its enticing head, I opened it, read it, and quickly chastized myself for being such a moron for even thinking about going into a room full of teenagers!  


Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway

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