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'Neath Moon-Drenched Waves
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'Neath Moon-Drenched Waves |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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'Neath moon-drenched waves of silver Time's embrace so gently slows And between the sprays of seaweed A mermaid's song does flow... ~*~ Fragile dreams caress the tides And dive through creamy foam With water sprites to carry us Here we can forever roam... ~*~ Water laces through my hair And dewdrops kiss my skin And within your pulsing eyes Passion rises again.. ~*~ And 'neath moon-drenched waves of silver Time's embrace so gently slows As within your touch desire's flame Begins to brightly glow... ~*~ *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful poem, my dear! I enjoyed this one much, especially the two lines "Water laces through my hair And dewdrops kiss my skin" great image, hehe. Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Krista, this is absolutley gorgeous!!! Loved every line. I'm in awe of your talent girl!  WOW! My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Two meltings in one night... sigh. Love it Krista. You've made me sigh with this one yet again. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
HAHHAHAHAHHA!! You tried to hide this most wonderful poem from me, but I found it! you can't hide them Krista! I found it!!!! -continues to gloat- wonderful poem, I loved it."Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful! Beautiful! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah... I love this love poem. LoveBugs know love poems better than anyone, ya know. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*cant type* ... fingers are too clenched up with poet envy... send help...nevermind...just send your muse  I'll send you muse back in a few months.. I SWEAR  LOLEXQUISITE K, AGAIN (dang it)  jm |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ Just so lovely. So you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much, I deeply appreciate your kindness. *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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