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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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I bathe in moonshine of lustrous light I drink you and you seep within leak not from me, one dewdrop nor tear or a sprinkle of you and fold me, allow me to rest gently within the moonstone of your heart Angel of Darkness My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lightly flowing down the page..that's how I read this one....excellent!!! I love it. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Moonshine? You mean, liquor? LOL Seriously, Angel of Darkness, this was exquisitely lovely! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Your words are pure beauty woven into a wonderful verse....exellent work my friend!  *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i beauty woven here i don't have words to express but i to know its great. and i can't wait to read more of your work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sharon, thanks honey, glad you loved it. Elizabeth, Alcohol??? yes that too LOL nahhh kidding. Thanks so much for your lovely reply. Krista, I cheris your comments, thank you Jeremiah, wow thank you!! My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is a little runnel of water down the page...like tears or rain. Perhaps both M? Love ya K~Sleeping Beauty never knew how lucky she really was~ (Me) |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
DA - this is beautiful! I thank you again. Huggs, J. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Kamla, well actually neither. Thanks, love ya back.J, you are most welcome hon My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I drink you and you seep within...WOW! Girl this is GOOD! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ This is so YOU ! Love it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This one absoulutely teases the senses with their words silky soft allure..... Love It!< !signature--> Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". [This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 06-27-2000).] |
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