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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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peace comes at last for you through the darkness I see you face hidden moving closer I do not know you should I? what are you doing here? when for so many years you were not near? speak to me in gentle whispers trying to explain from your grave you scream to me "please don't be afraid" I shut my ears to you turn off the sound your voice is haunting me still angry afraid feeling betrayed yet wondering why? how? where were you then? where are you now? never watched me grow now you'll never know Daddy how I missed you so!! Julie :) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Julie Ann. This made me extremely sad, I could feel the hurt all through the whole poem. I'm glad you are writing from the heart it can help so much. Very well done! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is so sad, I wrote one with the same idea a few months ago, if you would like I'll share it with you. Take care and thank you for shaing this, I hope writing will help you to heal as it has for me~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thanks Butterflys, I would like that.... And thanks to all who reply to my poems even though I don't go toeach one and reply with a thank you it is much appreciated!!  |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
It seems that you have gone through some terrible times. Writing does help for some.  Stay strong, and Great Poem. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Julie this poem was very sad and moved me greatly. i am sorry for the troubles you had with your dad. i hope you can find a way to heal, perhaps writing will be that avenue for you. take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The pain is evident and the feelings straight from your heart. Sorry life has given you this ordeal, but writing about it will help and it will touch many souls to whom share experiences such as this. Thank you for the avenue and the honesty to your soul. I will cherish the memory of this one for eternity. |
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