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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Am I not thy queen, my lord? Queen of thy heart, Where lovers souls entwine, Never depart, Am I not your harbor, Harbor to thy soul, Keep thee safe beyond seas, Seas out of control, Am I not your love, my lord,? Lover of desire, Passion untamed, Burning in you this flame, Am I not sweat of thy brow,my lord? Sweat of worry, affliction, Being caught, Am I not your crown, my lord? Displayed like a jewel, For thy noble identity, Am I not the sweet of thy heart, Sweet words bestowed, Poetic passsion into thy soul, Am I not these things and more? If not, that I am, Then who fills thy thoughts? One and only I am, Lady fair for one heart, If be someone else not I, I am not. [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ARH~ this is the second one of yours I've had the pleasure of reading today... I really like this~ it is BEAUTIFUL!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks sea, I am not a great poet, but replies like yours helps to feel I am something! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, you are something, romantic one! Really something  |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Just enchanting...i liked this very much good work... Julie :) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Balladeer...Ok so my new nickname is something! LOL! Thanks for makeing me feel special!!! Julie..welcome to passions, thanks for reading and replying!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH, Beautiful writing here my friend. I think you are the "Queen of Romance"....LOL.... Wonderful... LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Yes I do believe that you are the Queen.... The question is do you have a King...m'Lady. Parker |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very nice Romantic Heart Enjoyed reading this one you write Coco |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
OH MY, Not a good poet you say? You are an absolute delight to read my dear Always enjoy your poetry All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is another piece of your work that i enjoyed reading keep it up so i have something to read in this house of mine. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This was truly a very romantic piece..i liked reading this very much Wonderful Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is beautiful , I like your work very much |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Queen? Definitely!!!! From what I have read in the 2 days I have been here you ARE good and your talent gives forth to your being. Can't wait for the next one. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
If I didn't already have a Queen, you would be in the running. Excellent poem. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Well you have burned up my monitor yet again R.H. your passion is limitless and your delivery faultless, this is wonderful. "When you kiss me I feel glow, Deep inside my soul, is a Fire There is no place that I can go, To escape the thrill, and Desire, For you" My tribute to a marvellous talent- Olias |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
You're one of the queens of good poetry anyway Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
LOne..lol!!!So new passions title..Queen of Romance...cool! Sir parker, thy lady thanks you, My king sits on a throne... Coco..thank you kindly Jeff...Thanks for the encouragement I need it! Jer...I am trying to keep it up..just have to have inspiration! Tracie...glad you liked it thanks! Whiskey...thank you for taking time to read! Mark...I am blushing, and humbled, Thank you! Sey...so sweet, to know I would be in the running! Your queen is bleesed! Olias...Sorry about that monitor! lol!I can call 911? Your tribute is awesome!!! To what honour do I deserve such beautiful words! THANK YOU ALL!!!!I WAS FEELING A LITTLE LOW WHEN I POSTED< YOUR WORDS ARE LIKE SUNSHINE TO MY HEART! THANKS FOR THE STRENGTH< THE ENCOURAGEMENT!!! I NEEDED IT!!! LOVE YOU ALL!!  ..MY frown was turned into a smile!!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Eric, you sneaky poet you, you posted as I was posting.. |
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