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Have you ever? |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Have you ever met someone that sparked your life with desire? Have you ever met someone that set you soul on fire? Have you fell for someone you knew you couldn't keep? Have you ever dreamt of him in a restless sleep? Have you looked into his eyes and said a little prayer? Have you ever looked into his heart and wished that you were there? Have you ver held onto the hope of someday? Have you ever cried your self to sleep from what you didn't say? Have you ever let him go? wondering if he would return? Have you ever let him know? Will you ever learn??? |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i think this is great i should summit it for the book or try and make a song out of it cause thats what it seems like. good job here keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sitting here shaking my head* oh man does this one cut deep tonight... every line... and NO I never learn... dont know if i want to... you already know --I FELT this poem. perfect JA...just perfect... jm |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Julie Ann, Great poem. I doubt any of us will ever learn although I am sure we have all been there. Wonderful writing. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I also doubt if I will ever learn. A dream, a love, and a desire has haunted me for 26 years and I am in the third attempt. Hoping for either peace or resolve. Boy does this ever hit home. Keep it up; this is a definite winner.  |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
This brings back memories of many a blue day, My biggest regrets are the things i've left unsaid, but you have said it all, Thankyou Olias |
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