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Garden Of Your Heart
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Garden Of Your Heart |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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"Garden Of Your Heart" Upon our meeting, I could stare a thousand miles, miles deep into your soul, Your eyes, How they capture me, By the mystery they behold, Into your garden, the garden of your heart, I see all the flowers start, Start to bloom, blooming inside every part, Through the windows of your soul, Heart full of different flowers, Different feelings for me, I see, Each planted by a seed, I have showered each flower, Through many a tears' power, Raining, pouring feelings into your heart, I close my eyes, While smelling this moment,, Feeling every feeling from your heart, A Bouquet, Bouquet of your love, I do see the beauty it displays, Different colors, different smells, You show your love well, In the center of the garden, The garden of your heart, There stands a rose, A rose so beautiful in bloom, Blooming from my love,I see, Glistening ever so brightly, I am in a daze, Amazed by the beauty, I am in a trance, It is not the beauty, But her sweet smell, Smell of romance, Intoxicating she is, Through the smell, Smell of her loves fragrance, This rose, a symbol of our love, Planted in the center of your heart, Heart full of many blooms, I am enchanted by every part, Looking deep inside the garden of your heart! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great work. i love the symbol that the rose plays as the love i hope who this is about knows this is how you feel. good job here. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Jeremiah! it is for my muse! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely! A beautiful bouquet! It reminded me of this great flower shop I pass on the way home from work! Heaven!  Denise |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
THe garden of your heart - beautiful deep emotions of love. Just excellent A Romantic Heart!! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ARH, your words are chosen very nicely, and they seem to have a deep meaning to my heart, its very amazing just how much. Really loved the read..... .... I have tempted other flowers in the garden but show no emothion, they will ever know My heart is lost to that special flower, and as I walk through the garden, I know, I can love, Only the Rose. Parker |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Denise thank you, you sweet sunflower you!!! ethome...You felt the deepness of love, just what I wanted to express! I appreciate you Parker...I am at a loss for words..(boy, that is hard to believe)I am glad to have touched your heart in a deep meaningful way!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH, Beautiful imagery!!! I just love roses!! This is perfect...really. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Hey girl where ya been? here is a rose for you my friend!!!!E-mail me!!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lone..forgive me...I forgot to say thank you on that last reply!!!!Your a wonderful friend!! |
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