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Butterfly Thoughts - III
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Butterfly Thoughts - III |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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A butterfly said to me, come lets fly...into the sky...high...  Butterfly Thoughts - III -------------------------------- O Majestic Queen of the sky, O beautiful lovely butterfly! Keeper of many secrets of nature, Holder of many a question's answer! Colour my canvas, my butterfly, Touch my heart before I die - Show me how to live in joy, And how, never to say good-bye. As you flutter by, I let out a sigh, Things missed because I never tried, With patient hard struggle to be free, You turned your life around just to show me. On serene wings of your beauty I can rely, Oh! What celestial magic you do supply. Amazing, my jewel, how you heard my plea, Entrapped in my soul, I feel your beauty. Let's fly together, two souls as one, And soar beyond time, to faraway horizon, With silken wings that God has spun, Souls entwined, an infinite journey has begun... [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As you flutter by, I let out a sigh, Things missed because I never tried, With patient hard struggle to be free, You turned your life around just to show me. On serene wings of your beauty I can rely, Oh! What celestial magic you do supply. Amazing, my jewel, how you heard my plea, Entrapped in my soul, I feel your beauty. Let's fly together, two souls as one, And soar beyond time, to faraway horizon, With silken wings that God has spun, Souls entwined, an infinite journey has begun... ------------------ WOW... the butterflies in India must be spectacular... cause they sure inspire amazing things in you sir... this is superb... and ya know what I always say... ~Butterflies are meant to be free~  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Butterflies in India are spectacular indeed...only pity is that I am here in belgium imagining what goes on in India...but when I had been off relaxing in a park in brussels, I saw a few butterflies and wanted to talk to them, and no, I was not high on anything not even caffeine that morning.... yes, I also think butterflies are meant to be free, but then why can't a butterfly and me be friends...its a butterfly reflection thats trapped in me and I want to fly away with a butterfly friend...now that is fair is it not? Thanks for reading and for your WOW, Janet, you are very kind.... regards, sudhir |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Oh Sudhir, this one was so beautiful. Explained well from the heart. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Beautiful description of being carried away by a Butterfly!! Nice!! Bridgette"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Gemini, thanks for reading and feeling that way... Bridgette, Thanks a lot for your appreciation... regards, sudhir |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Keeper of many secrets of nature, Holder of many a question's answer! Colour my canvas, my butterfly, Touch my heart before I die - Show me how to live in joy, And how, never to say good-bye. On serene wings of your beauty I can rely, Oh! What celestial magic you do supply. Amazing, my jewel, how you heard my plea, Entrapped in my soul, I feel your beauty. the spirit of the butterfly lives in your words, its playfullness, its beauty its splendour and grace. wonderful. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Brian, Many thanks... regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Leaving for noon break, I espied a butterfly that caught my eye and then I thought of you see what magic you can do? "Let's fly together, two souls as one, And soar beyond time, to faraway horizon, With silken wings that God has spun, Souls entwined, an infinite journey has begun..." this says it all. Well done, good Sir! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Karilea, Deeply felt thanks to you my friend... regards, sudhir.... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Very nice thoughts, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks Marge, many thanks... ...and many regards too, Sudhir |
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