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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Words that touch All the way under Deep within my soul Long ago trapped By your eloquence So intrusive to me Smoothness so sweet Tormented by your way So familar, so real Unable to explain Knowledge lay away This is the key Upside down Inside out Turned around Mirror image Of that love lost Impossible to see All the same really Another time far away Everything shall be complete "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
*sigh* Just wonderful! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Impossible to see All the same really Another time far away Everything shall be complete ........ Lovely... regards, sudhir |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You both!! I don't know if I would say "lovely" to describe it myself!! It's not really a happy love poem to me!! But, on the other hand I LOVE the fact all different people interpret my poetry different and I like that a lot!!  Bridgette"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I have read this five times now....still pondering your words....great poem....Very deep....I feel there is alot that lies betwwen the lines here...Great work!  Julie :) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
JulieAnn, Thank You, and you are absolutely right, about something between the lines!!  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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