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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-06-21 07:07 AM


The Round Table

We sat around a table in a place remote from here
A steak house known for Argentine beef and that great choppe beer
And everyone was joking wildly full of youthful cheer
But laughter stopped abruptly with , "Man, what are we doing here?

He said, look at the bunch of us in a foreign town tonight
We should be home with family and doing what is right
But as for me, I just don't have the guts in me to fight
So I dodged the draft and borrowed money for a one way flight

He said we're all escaping from something that we did
Or we've got something deep inside that's been a long time hid
But we're all here for a reason, and I've just got a hunch
That there's not a single tourist in this whole American bunch

Then going around the table, each one told his little tale
The first one said if I go back I know I'm going to jail
The next one said that's just about where I am coming from
I won't go back and they'll never make me go to Viet Nam

The next one said he burned his draft card and threw it to the wind
But I had seen him holding hands with the guy right next to him
So I had a feeling he was escaping more than just a war
But his friend said he was studying fish along the eastern shore

And so it went around the table, each had run away
From family, war or other kind of turbulence of the day
But I knew my turn was coming and my heart began to pound
As each one spoke and so my turn had finally come around

So what are you doing here with us in a place so far from home
I didn't know how to put in words the meaning of "alone"
I didn't know if my trembling was from hunger or from fear
So I looked around the table and I answered with a tear

Just then the beef was being served and more cold choppe too
And jokes and wild laughter quick filled the smokey room

Elizabeth Santos


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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-06-21 07:21 AM


He said we're all escaping from something that we did
Or we've got something deep inside that's been a long time hid
But we're all here for a reason, and I've just got a hunch
That there's not a single tourist in this whole American bunch
....

So what are you doing here with us in a place so far from home
I didn't know how to put in words the meaning of "alone"
I didn't know if my trembling was from hunger or from fear
So I looked around the table and I answered with a tear

Just then the beef was being served and more cold choppe too
And jokes and wild laughter quick filled the smokey room
........

This is one of the most moving and profound poems in recent times that I have read...

we're all escaping from something

ARE WE NOT???
...

Thanks for presenting this beautiful poem, Liz, Thank you....

regards, sudhir



[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-21-2000).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2000-06-21 08:46 AM


Elizabeth,
You touched on a tender point, but you did it so well. Wonderful poem. Love Sy

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2000-06-21 08:54 AM


Sudhir, Thanks for your kind reponse
Liz

Sy, Hi, stranger It's only 5:45 where I am so I was surprised to see you up so early. Thank you, dear friend
Love ya
Liz

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