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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-06-21 06:20 AM


~A candle burns for You~

A candle burns for you
~ throughout the day and night
Burning oh so brightly
~ that you may find the light

My wish is that this candle
~ will always burn for you
Burning flame of spirits
~ to help guide you through

Guide you to your next journey
~ that awaits you in the light
Your eternal peace and happiness
~ is now within your sight

So a candle burns for you
~ flame flickering in the breeze
God keep the candle burning
~ thats all I ask....Please
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Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 06-21-2000).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-06-21 09:00 AM


Very lovely....beautiful sentiments etched,
I really enjoyed this one, Tracie



regards, sudhir.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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2 posted 2000-06-21 09:56 AM


this is perfect Trac,
beautiful and perfect...
such serene thoughts
later-perfect-poet-gator
jm

SEA
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3 posted 2000-06-21 10:02 AM


Tracie~ oh this is so loving~ keeping a candle lit for a loved one.   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



tracie66
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4 posted 2000-06-22 03:21 AM


Sudhir~
Thanks for reading this and thanks for you lovely comments, I'm glad you enjoyed.
Tracie~

Janny~
So glad you like this, thanks for reading and replying in your most touching way  
Tracie~

Sea~
Thanks..I think it helps doesn't it, I hope so.. It helps us in some ways
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



whiskey
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5 posted 2000-06-22 04:48 AM


wonderful poem tracie, Beautifully written  
tracie66
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6 posted 2000-06-24 05:56 AM


Whiskey~
Thanks for your lovely reply
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-06-24 09:26 AM


Tracie~
I really like this offering from your pen.
The presentation is soft and glowing.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
8 posted 2000-06-24 11:13 AM


Tracie~
this was very beautiful and peaceful!
Excellent emotion coming from that
wonderful poetic pen of yours!
Take care.
Amy  

"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




FadingSun
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9 posted 2000-06-25 07:16 PM


Tracie,

This is so beautiful....I haven't had much time to visit the forum lately, but this poem reminded me how deeply I missed it. I love your poetry deeply!

S~


In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair: in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
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10 posted 2000-06-26 03:24 AM


Marge~
Thanks for your lovely comments. My pen was going wild the other night, I could hardly keep up
Tracie~

Aim~
I'm so glad you liked it...Thanks  
Tracie~

S~
Yeah I was wondering where you had gotten to, I was missing you around the place  
Thanks for your wonderful comments.
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



CocoBaci
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11 posted 2000-06-26 03:31 AM


Very nice indeed .. as always  
Coco

tracie66
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12 posted 2000-06-27 05:24 AM


Coco thanks for that and also the smile..here's one in return  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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