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A Story |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Now I tell you a tale Of something that will not fail Though you may have doubts Others know nothing about Long,long ago Deep within my soul My life, yet to flow Your heart did I pull Out of the cosmic hat Our hearts did chat I found who was to be mine Till the end of time Born to this earth Without the slightest hint Of what would be our worth Until our eyes met Now I sit back and wonder How I let it go under Our lives are now separate All because I was desparate I never wanted to hurt you Never to cross those lines So I ran from you I believed my lies I told myself it was for the best But that has failed time's test Now I sit in my lament Knowing we were always meant Some cruel twist of fate Has brought this to me Once again too late Will I ever be free This torment will not end Unless we begin again This is my comeback poem. I have been gone for a while. I am back now and writing  . I have missed you all.SD |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
And what a comeback! This poem really touched me. It will touch anyone who has loved and lost. I hope you find happiness soon. Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
My friend you get me everytime!! Words that touch All the way under Deep within my soul Long ago trapped By your eloquence So intrusive to me Smoothness so sweet Tormented by your way So familar, so real Unable to explain Knowledge lay away This is the key Upside down Inside out Turned around Mirror image Of that love lost Impossible to see All the same really Another time far away Everything shall be complete Your writing just seems to get better and better!! Very nice piece!! Welcome back to Passions!!  Bridgette < !signature--> "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
I thank you all for your kind responses. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks for the story Scorched Dragon. It's not an unheard story but it's amazing how many soulful ways it can be presented and take on a different point of view everytime. Well done! |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
I am glad you like it. |
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