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Holly
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 127
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-06-21 01:16 AM


-Lust-


can I trust you to keep this secret of ours?
how do we know this won't get out of hand and goto far?
how did we end up here-lurking in the shadows and always with some degree of fear
feeling the fear of being found out to others-but not able to stop this with my lover
please don't foresake my trust in you-if you betrayed me now, what would I do?
it doesn't seem fair to ask your faithfullness when I can't give you mine either-nor my trust
so all we have for now are stolen passionate moments-not trust-not faithfullness-just our overwhelming lust

HLB



I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne


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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2000-06-21 01:35 AM


good work at work here you got my vote. i really do like the ending it just hits you to a state of truth.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul



MysticalNights
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since 2000-05-17
Posts 112
Oklahoma
2 posted 2000-06-21 10:44 AM


Holly..beautiful poem.  I know the way you are feeling here.  This is truly great work..

A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes...

sleepless
Junior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 13

3 posted 2000-06-21 10:56 AM


Very Direct and honest,
more people in the world should be this forward, very good! waiting for more.......

CMGrimm
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 685
USA
4 posted 2000-06-22 11:09 AM


GREAT WORK HOLLY....as always...

ouknowiluvit....keepemcomin...

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.



Alexander Duke
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since 2000-06-16
Posts 12

5 posted 2000-06-22 04:11 PM


I found this poem very funny because I read
I could picture the whole story.

It is honest and I particularly like the end.

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