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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma 
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Loving Eyes Enchanted I gazed upon you Tried to breathe but could find no air Still remember the curves of your body The glisten of flowing blonde hair What I remember thinking As those pearls of love showed true I could drown in these eyes A perfect shade of blue Their magic whisked me away To a place I've never been So filled with life and love Their boundries have no end Like stars stolen from heaven They were so beautifully placed Windows showing all the love In this precious angel's face The night was filled with laughter There was nothing I could do Completely captivated With erotic thoughts of you That night my heart was stolen My soul forever unlocked My mind set to endlessly wonder My emotions left in shock One day I hope to find An endless search it seems The angel with those loving eyes Ever present in my dreams A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Mystical Nights- Well I certainly can not say I'm shocked...but I'm highly impressed. This is wonderful work...I just love the heartfelt expression you give this work. You make this woman seem so angelic and she's truly a very lucky woman to be seen through your eyes. I'm sure she knows this already though... love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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sleepless Junior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 13 |
WOW!!!!!! That hit me right through the heart... very good job! |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Holly, I'm glad you liked it. Yes this woman is an angel to me, and I do hope she knows just how special she really is. sleepless, Thank for you comment. The heart was where I was aiming... A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You truely do have loving eyes and a loving heart! Magical filled poem...Thanks for the peek inside your heart  WELCOME TO PASSIONS![This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
This was very beautiful. I hope that one day you will find the angel in your dreams. I hope she's everything you've ever dreamed of. Good luck! Kat |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Mystical Nights! This was an enchanting journey into your heart ... your words were truly delightful and beautifully expressed! Best wishes, and Welcome to Passions! /Kit |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Mystical this was both romantic and beautiful!!! loved it! take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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