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The Unnoticed |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
A quiet thunder sounds in the night It tremors the stillness in the air The breeze moves slowly across the wilderness It is there that she stands Majestic clouds float across the sky Pouring their hearts out over the land The emerald sea begins to churn Yet this young maiden still stands The violent storm rages all around yet remains unnoticed in her mystical blue eyes. The strong winds whip her golden hair across her face But there she still stands In the darkness, her life goes unnoticed Just as it does in the day. She is just one pail star in the night sky One that cannot be seen when the clouds get in the way. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DE~ this is so beautiful and so sad....  -SEA |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah my friend, even if the tempest above is raging, the clouds still notice that beautiful little star which is you. For how could one forget such a stunning soul as yoruself? I know I never could...gorgeous and sad work here Cassers. *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can see that star in the sky. . . how could anyone not?? Wonderful poem DE. . . sad and touching. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Cassers, you're never unnoticed, angel sight pierces clouds and us earthbound misfits see you through the clouds, love is a light that pierces Great writing here, sorrow laced. < !signature-->Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon [This message has been edited by Dusk Treader (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
If you look hard enuff star always shine on through anything that stands in their way. love the poem still congrats I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Thank you all... it means a lot. Krista, I love yah and thank you so much... and Abe, thank you as well... Sven,Jeremiah, SEA, your messages were touching... Thanks again. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful mystic setting backed up with visionary type phrases and words. Very very interesting and well done! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Wow..I enjoyed this and am glad to have found it. I feel this way sometimes too. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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