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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
This is no life, to be sad and dreary to live life in hope of death. The title of lonliest heart I do hereby claim, for the right of all the cold-hearted. To know me is to hate me, to love me is a lie, to be my friend is a pain. Can you say it's been great?? |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Lonely , No , I can't say it's been great . For the most part it pretty well s**ks ,but the alternative for you and all those around you is infinitely worse .Besides , I'd have one less person to write my prattle for. Doc |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is very sad LP... your words break my heart... i hope you find some healing and comfort in your writing if these emotions are a true reflection of your heart... we ALL have something to give and we ALL are here for a reason... fate will show us all in time.. and always remember... you were given the gift of being able to write for a reason too. take care jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving (How one move just puts me by myself) There you go just trusting someone else (Now I know I put us both through hell) ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong (I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me) And I'm not sayin (We ever had the right to hold on) (I just didn't wanna let you get away from me) ~MB20~ She says baby, It's 3AM ... I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. ~MB20~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
a life full of regrets is no life at all...let it go and get on with it |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Heartbroken am I as I read this and wish to give you some little comfort that you have a purpose. I do know from the responses to your work and the feelings I am blessed with when I read one of yours that you do bring much sunshine by way of your words. Please keep a hope and dream within; someone who is deserving will want to share it with you someday. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LP~ the sadness and desperation in this tore my heart into two. please tell me this isn't a true reflection of your feelings. janet said it better than I and she is right we ALL are worthy of life and to be happy. in time you will find out what your purpose is. and she's also right about the writing thing. to be able to write is a gift few are given. treasure it and share it as you have, learn and heal with and from it and you will see your life will slowly but surely begin to turn around. you are in my thoughts. take care sweetie. amy p.s jan is always right lol  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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