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David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2000-06-20 05:57 PM

The Eyes Of Love

She radiates redemptive charity
The luminescent light of love's bouquet.
For one such sweet seductive rarity
There yet remains no fitting sobriquet.
For how may one describe what love has wrought
Or illustrate in words perfection born?
She simply symbolizes solace sought
The mender of hearts broken, pained and torn.
But gaze into the eyes of one possessed
To see the face of loving grace refined,
Her vivid beauty solely there expressed,
Poetic eloquence at once defined.

These eyes alone reflect her essence well,
And hold the truth mere words refuse to tell.

[This message has been edited by David2 (edited 06-21-2000).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-06-20 06:10 PM

She simply symbolizes solace sought
The mender of hearts broken,pained and torn.
But gaze into the eyes of one possessed
To see the face of loving grace refined,
Her vivid beauty solely there expressed,
Poetic eloquence at once defined.

These eyes alone reflect her essence well,
And hold the truth mere words refuse to tell.
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my eyes do so enjoy when you write about eyes

another eloquent graceful jewel D2...
(i guess you know which one Im hoping you submit for the book)

we need some sonnets to make it be poetically perfect
later-poetic perfection-gator
jm

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2000-06-20 09:22 PM

The mender of hearts broken,pained and torn.
But gaze into the eyes of one possessed
To see the face of loving grace refined

She radiates redemptive charity
The luminescent light of love's bouquet.
For one such sweet seductive rarity

WOW!WOW!WOW! Beautiful!!!!Lovely!!!

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2000-06-20 10:32 PM

Sonnet perfection!

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

4 posted 2000-06-20 10:35 PM

Oh wow! A love sonnet! This was just perfection.

It made my heart smile. I would write more but I want to go back and read it again. Beautiful!!!

--You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.--

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