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QTpieOmy
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 11
Illinois

0 posted 2000-06-20 03:42 PM


My best friend is lost
Put away for doing wrong
She shouldn't have done that
Got herself in trouble
Drugs lead her the wrong way
I told her what they would do-
Drugs are no good
Did she listen?
And now shes in jail
No where to be seen
She wanted me to come visit her
She wanted me to write
She wanted me to talk on the phone
But it was too late
She lost my confidence in her
That only a mother could have
I looked up to her for all my life
And now all my faith in her is lost
She lost the most important thing
That she could ever have
Her childs faith in her
How could she do that?
I wish I had the answers...
Shes back at home now
But still hasn't gained her childs faith
She said she had time to think
That now she knows whats important
Its not drugs,
Or her friends,
Or money,
Instead its her child
Her child is now her number one priority
Or so she says
Do I believe that?
After all the lies
After all the lost faith
Do I believe it?
My best friend is lost...

  
  

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Jan
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 114

1 posted 2000-06-20 04:11 PM


Forgiveness is hard, but holding on to anger (no matter  how well deserved) takes its toll as well.  Good luck to you.  Your poem is really very moving.
Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

2 posted 2000-06-21 01:20 AM


Faith is hard to regain, to be sure, but it can happen. Do keep expressing yourself!

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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