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SEA
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0 posted 2000-06-20 10:09 AM



It's as if I was made to fit
in these arms so strong
guiding me ~ moving me
to this slow seductive song

Hot kisses you are trailing
from my ear to neck
causing explosions
leaving me a wreck

Fires burning~
where your fingertips caress
set my heart leaping
in passionate distress

Tingling~
now from head to toe
this dance so delicious
in candle light's soft glow

-SEA-

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2000-06-20 10:14 AM


OOOOOOhhhhhhhhs  and aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhss for this one  

Lets dance... (...maybe in the rain...)


regards, sudhir.

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2 posted 2000-06-20 10:36 AM


Oh my goodness!  I think I may have to go home for lunch! WOW-
Aimster
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3 posted 2000-06-20 10:48 AM


Wow!
The passion in this one sure
did kindle something within
me   very romantic, and quite
passionate i must say!
great poem!
take care.
amy  

"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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Sudhir~ thank you for the ooohh's and aaahhh's!  

Jan~ have a great lunch!  

Amy~ thanks!  

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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5 posted 2000-06-20 11:22 AM


SEA - What a wonderful dance you describe. Great poem.  Bonnie

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Bonnie~ thanks!  
-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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7 posted 2000-06-20 12:39 PM


Its very passionate..I loved every verse in it...kisses on the neck..it's so beautiful and I can relate to it very well..

Sincerely
A_L

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8 posted 2000-06-20 01:16 PM


SEA~
Girlfriend ... I like it !  
Lots and lots.
~*Marge*~


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9 posted 2000-06-20 05:35 PM


This is a fabulous piece, Sea. You also expressed yourself very well too!
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10 posted 2000-06-20 09:02 PM


Playing songs of sensual rhythm
Swaying bodies blending within
Language of movement speak erotic
Sensation of falling becoming hypnotic

Landing in love's SEA of pleasure
Floating around in a dance of forever
Eternity of flaming closeness
Leading each other past timeless bliss

Love your poem

ethome
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11 posted 2000-06-20 09:08 PM


That dance sounds like it getting quite warm. Very sensual piece of poetic work. Got me going!
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12 posted 2000-06-20 10:34 PM


This is Quite a dance!!! Very nice!
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A_L~ thank you, I'm glad you liked it!  

Marge~thanks

Nate~ thank you for the cool reply  

Insect~ Wow! Thank you!  

Ethome~ Excellent, thanks  

B_D_C~ my favorite kind of dance... glad you liked this!  

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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14 posted 2000-06-20 11:43 PM


SEA~

You have such a great talent!  Beautiful poem!

"Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

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Dawn E~ thanks very much!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



Mark Bohannan
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16 posted 2000-06-21 10:03 AM


Great poem.  I believe my day will be short and my nite quite long.  Thank you for the pleasure I now feel.
OLIAS
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17 posted 2000-06-21 10:11 AM


I feel dance steps in your rhyme and passion in your heart wonderful poem Thankyou
Olias

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18 posted 2000-06-21 04:09 PM


I enjoyed reading this romantic poem..seems like the place where I would like to be.  James
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19 posted 2000-06-21 04:26 PM


Ah, I like dances, stories about dancing, poems about dancing...nice job!

Sunshine

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Helen Keller ~~~


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20 posted 2000-06-21 04:30 PM


Great job sea! I like these knd of dances too, now if I could find someone willing to dance like this it would be a delight!!!
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21 posted 2000-06-21 08:07 PM


Mark,Olias,James,Sunshine,and A Romantic Heart~ thank you all for your nice replys   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



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