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LadySofia
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since 2000-05-16
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0 posted 2000-06-20 03:58 AM


Universal Unity

A spiraling of spider's lace,
An unending universal race,
Connected by an invisible line,
The ending is the beginning sign.

Fleeting glimpses of life alive,
Emotion swirls, takes a dive
Fighting, slowing, growing weak,
Forces push along the peak.

Passionate embrace of passing trend,
Following the line as it may wend,
Into infinity and beyond the sky,
Together bound until we die.

^_^ Amanda Piatt

Copyright ©2000 Amanda Piatt



"Come what come may, time and the hour runs through the roughest day."
A line from Macbeth, by William Shakespear

© Copyright 2000 Amanda Piatt - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2000-06-20 05:32 AM


Amanda, Wow, this is terrific! absolutley loved it.  

My grief lies onward and my joy behind
(Shakespeare)

X Angel
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521
Oregon
2 posted 2000-06-20 09:12 AM


Wow! This was an incredible piece of penmanship  
Kudos
~Heather

LadySofia
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since 2000-05-16
Posts 238
FL., USA
3 posted 2000-06-20 03:09 PM


Thank you X Angel and Dark Angel   I'm glad you liked it!

^_^ Amanda

"Come what come may, time and the hour runs through the roughest day."
A line from Macbeth, by William Shakespear

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