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Used Heart For Sale |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Wanted to sell, one heart very cheaply Is in need of someone who will keep it neatly. A heart is seeking for a buyer or lease. A reputable owner to give it peace. Sometimes the right person can make it strong. So it won't have to just exist to get along. It has been broken, is in need of repair. And is fervently seeking someone to care. It is forever looking so it won't be afraid of... Love |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sigh* sad sweet poem here gemini... sure wish I didnt relate to it so well your ache is evident and well expressed in just a few words.... offer em a buy one get one free deal... I'll throw mine in the kitty  take care fellow gemini jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving (How one move just puts me by myself) There you go just trusting someone else (Now I know I put us both through hell) ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong (I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me) And I'm not sayin (We ever had the right to hold on) (I just didn't wanna let you get away from me) ~MB20~ She says baby, It's 3AM ... I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. ~MB20~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Ouch, Gemini. Good work though. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
witty, sweet, and sad, enjoyed reading it  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Clever little piece!! I love this!! It is sad though!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Bravo here wonderful piece enjoyed reding it. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Very good...nice theme...heart for sale...I like that....Hope you find a good buyer!!! Julie :) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I understand all to well, you wrote with wit and with style, thank you for sharing this! |
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