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ladybugs1102
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since 2000-06-19
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0 posted 2000-06-19 01:19 PM


love...
love is something that connects two people together by their souls
true love is when you stay close in every situation no matter what
whether the situation is good or bad
if you feel happy or sad
if you are crying, yelling or laughing
you will always stay by their side
your true love is someone you are close to in every way possible
you can tell them anything
you can and do listen to everything they have to say
you take their advice, help them when they are in need
they make you feel like no other
just the thought of them makes you happy
you feel like you have everything you could have ever wanted when you are with them
but you feel so empty when they are not there
you feel lost
you fill incomplete
you sit in a daze
but when you are with them
you feel like you are on top of the world
like nothing else matters but the love you have for one another
then you look deeply into their eyes
you get lost in them
the feeling is truly undescribable
there are no words that you can say or write to explain that feeling
its a feeling you get only when you are with them
you grow so close to them
they are like your best friend
your one-love
your real love
your soul mate
your one true love
your one and only love
they can never be replaced
nor do you want to try to replace them
they are a part of you
they have a place in your heart that only they can fill
you will always have that special place no matter what
you would do anything for them
they are your life
they mean everything to you
its like you are in a different world when you are with them
they would never hurt you
nor you them
they will always be there
they will always love you and only you
you mean the world to them
so when you find someone who gives you that feeling
the feeling of being loved
the feeling of being cared for
when you have that undescribable feeling
that only that one person can give you
thats when you know you have found
your true love..

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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-06-19 02:26 PM


Lovely thoughts and well expressed ladybugs1102...

and   WELCOME TO PASSIONS  

Hope that you enjoy your stay here...

regards, sudhir

amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-06-19 05:53 PM


It was a beautiful poem and I see that every emotion is heartfelt. Every verse conveys a very good emotion.

Sincerely
A_L

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