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sea_of_okc
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

0 posted 2000-06-19 01:00 PM


If I could see tomorrow
I wonder what I would find
Could be happiness or sorrow
Depends whether Fate is kind

Perhaps I should help Her out
In finding that which I need
Jump up and down, scream and shout
If that doesn't work I'll plead

Bring me a love that is true
That is all I'll ask for me
Fate pointed a finger at you
You must decide what will be

Of course I will do all that I can
To turn your heart towards me
Fate told me that I am the man
With whom you were meant to be...




[b]Steven Seaman [b]
[i] My poems are my hopes, my fantasies and my dreams
Created with emotion, imagination and thought
Read my words you will kno

© Copyright 2000 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved
UNC STAR
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since 2000-06-19
Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA
1 posted 2000-06-19 01:12 PM


That was a pretty neat poem.
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-06-19 01:21 PM


Tempting Fate...
tempted BY Fate...
very cool indeed
and a sweet premise...
tell fate what you want and then
help make it happen...
instead of waiting for it to come to you...
well expressed hopes here sweet-poet-gator
later
jm

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
3 posted 2000-06-19 04:24 PM


(blushing)   You talking to me..???  (batting eyes)  You say someone pointed to ME?  hehehe  This is very beautiful sir.  I wish the best for you as well - you certainly deserve someone just as equally wonderful as you are.  I know she's out there....   You just keep your panties untwisted a bit longer, and I'll bet she'll come riding up into your lawn to whisk you away!  LOL  I just LOVE giving you a hard time!  ROFLMAO  You're the best!  


"Fantasies enrich our lives to the fullest, but true satisfaction comes from creating your own story in the real world! Live out your fantasies & make a storybook with beautiful pictures for the world to enjoy! -poetFemme


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