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UNC STAR
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since 2000-06-19
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Hinesville,Ga,USA

0 posted 2000-06-19 12:04 PM


As the rain falls and the thunder rolls
Inside myself I feel very bold
and I ask myself things never before like
what must I do to open your heart
and even ask why are we so far apart
but maybe these things I need not to know
as the rain falls and the thunder rolls.

To me you are so special and you mean so much
and i get the chills by your slightest touch
you are my heart, soul, and fire, my sole desire
and as long as I'm with you our love love will grow higher and these are the things that you need to know as the rain falls and the thunder rolls.

By: Jamie Sharp





© Copyright 2000 Jamie - All Rights Reserved
Jan
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 114

1 posted 2000-06-19 12:50 PM


I love a good romance.  Well written.
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2000-06-20 11:43 AM


This is sooo sweet!!  ME likes!!

Welcome to Passions!!
Bridgette


"Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side

JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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3 posted 2000-06-20 03:25 PM


very good....welcome to passions, liked your poem.  

Julie :)


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-06-20 03:34 PM


Welcome to the family! Enjoyed this, and look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome!  
amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
5 posted 2000-06-20 05:51 PM


hi again you've asked some questions..only time will answer...its painful whenever you're away..so many things will happen out of your control..somethings which you can never imagine or think of...I guess its destiny..difficult to predict or control..
take care.

Sincerely
A_L

Lorraine Nisbet
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since 2000-05-18
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Jersey City, NJ USA
6 posted 2000-06-20 07:21 PM



UNC STAR~

Enjoyed your poem! Looking forward to reading more.  Welcome to Passions!

~Lorraine


A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


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