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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-06-19 10:30 AM


i write the story of my life
in my poetry
write about as it happens
then it will stay with me

can't forget the friends i've made
for soon we too will part
can't forget the mistakes i've made
or all the broken hearts

can't leave out one single scene
writing while it's fresh
telling tales of lonliness
heartache and the rest

someday happiness i'll find
and write about it i will
i write what is on my mind
the words flow out at will

so if you read my poetry
please understand one thing
a new life is unfolding before you
i'm on a moving train......


Julie :)

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whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
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1 posted 2000-06-19 10:33 AM


And what wonderful poems they are, words straight from the heart are always worth writing down dont ever stop  
JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
2 posted 2000-06-19 10:37 AM


Thank you whiskey......it seems a healthy outlet for getting things off my chest!  

Julie :)

Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
3 posted 2000-06-19 11:36 AM


poetry is a great way to vent. i don't know why, but it always works. all my best stuff was written during emotionally unstable times. but once it's on the paper, it's not stuck on your chest. good inspirational work you have here. and it paints a good picture of you as well.< !signature-->

We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

[This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 06-19-2000).]

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2000-06-19 11:47 AM


a new life is unfolding before you
i'm on a moving train......

JulieAnn.... thats a great thing to be on.. a moving train...carry on with your life, son, my father always says...never for a moment stay back looking at what you missed, ponder about yesterdays while you move towards tomorrow... is it not so true???

nice poetry, by the way.

enjoyed this one,
regards, Sudhir

UNC STAR
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since 2000-06-19
Posts 67
Hinesville,Ga,USA
5 posted 2000-06-19 12:14 PM


That was a very good poem.
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
6 posted 2000-06-19 04:38 PM


Julie~
I LOVED this poem! I loved the theme
of the moving train. Great expressions
from the heart. And as always you do it
with your usual grace and style!
Take care,
Amy  

"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




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