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Open Poetry #8

Lost Inside

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

0 posted 2000-06-19 10:12 AM

" Lost Inside"

Outside I cry
My heart does die
Inside my cell
For you I fell
Lost to me
Inside I see
You I want
Love to taunt
Deep within
A frowning grin
No you no me
No things to be
No way to know
No words to show
Just loss of mind
In time ill find

JulieAnn
Senior Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

1 posted 2000-06-19 10:18 AM

I read this five times...jut needed it all to sort of SINK in.....In the end I liked it and I relate.....do we all always fall for the wrong one??? or is just me??? thanks for sharing!!

Julie :)

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-06-19 10:21 AM

Whiskey~ this is so great!It has a nice sting to it.....

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB

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