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JulieAnn
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0 posted 2000-06-19 10:03 AM


My life packed in a suitcase
at the foot of my mothers bed
i think of US tonight
as I rest my weary head

though you are lying close to me
i feel thousands of miles away
you ask me to come back with you
but i know i'd never stay

so my mind drifts off
to what lies ahead
to scared to move forward
it's lonliness I dread

I pour my heart out to strangers
the web is my escape
strangers who may have answers
for none do I have yet....

i love you still
you love me
though we both know
it's not that easy

the anger, the bitterness
the late night tears
grew a space between us
over those many years

you kiss me tenderly
for one last time
please don't touch me like that
I can't change my mind

too mnay harsh words spoken
no time for amends
so my love go in peace
and please remain my friend...
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Julie  

[This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 06-19-2000).]

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whiskey
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1 posted 2000-06-19 10:17 AM


Wonderfully written , Love is so complicated sometimes friendship is all thats left but as long as we hold onto the good times we can grow from it  
SEA
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with you
2 posted 2000-06-19 10:25 AM


JulieAnn~ I hope you can remain friends, that wasn't something I was really good at. When the relationship was over I was done and outta there.But then, I usually had the jerks that you didn't mind getting away from(LOL)
Seriously, this is very sad and touched my heart, I wonder if you'll submit it for the book?! -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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