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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-06-19 03:21 AM


A wish was wished on the first star a Lover saw
A wish of love
A wish of longing

The keeper of the stars heard the wish
And was touched with the lover's longing
The lover's need for love

The keeper knew there was no greater wish wished
No deeper need needed

So the keeper sent down a falling star for the lover

When next the lover was out at dusk
A star did he see
A sparkling star
A star of untold beauty

He reached for the star
The star reached back

The star was you


Two lovers wished on a star


A wish forever more


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SEA
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1 posted 2000-06-19 03:25 AM


Eyes~ I see you're up late..... this is very sweet, I like it very much!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Ethan Halo
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2 posted 2000-06-19 03:28 AM


well versed. a new spin for "star-crossed lovers". i like the idea of it. the keeper just hasn't gotten to my message yet, i guess. =)

i dig it. keep up the great reads.

We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

eyesplus2
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3 posted 2000-06-19 04:04 AM


Thankyou both very much!

SEA Yes Iam up late....actually this is my normal time. I work this time of night.

By the way all these poems of mine are created at this time of night

Im glad you like them

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4 posted 2000-06-19 04:07 AM


Hey eyes,

great poem  

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep



eyesplus2
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5 posted 2000-06-19 04:23 AM


Thankyou Jeff. You are very Kind
tracie66
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6 posted 2000-06-19 06:41 AM


Oh this was a beautiful fantasy read, loved this wish  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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