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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-06-19 12:30 PM


Through times of tough
You were there for me
When I needed a friend
You gave me your self
Sharing your thoughts
On my lifes mistakes
You helped me to see
There was reason

You told me how much you needed me here
To be in your life
When Id given up
I wanted to go
Not you, you wouldnt let me
You stood by me
Night and day

You said you couldnt be without me
Your my Sister , my best friend you yelled
I wont let you do this to yourself
Life is full of good things
We met by fate , that has to mean something
I know you dont see it now
That your life has its worth
But in time you will
I am in your mind fighting your battle
Know this I will never give up
So rest now, sleep let it go
In the morning The sun will show
The way to the rest of your life

Thank you My angel
Without you I wouldnt be here
You are part of the reason you spoke of
The good things in life for me
I cherrish you always
My best friend, My Sis


© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-06-19 01:18 AM


Whiskey~ This is absolutely heart warming and sweet!   -SEA
whiskey
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2 posted 2000-06-19 10:27 AM


Thanks for replying Sea  
JulieAnn
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3 posted 2000-06-19 11:47 AM


this is a wonderful poem of the friendship between sister...i have sisters myself and they are dear to me.....there is nothing that can compare to this bond! Thanks for sharing...

Julie :)

Cerenity
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4 posted 2000-06-19 12:41 PM


Hi Whiskey,

This is wonderful, I have two teen girls that need to see this one, thank you so much for sharing.

Love,  Cerenity

laryalee
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5 posted 2000-06-19 03:32 PM


This is so beautiful - I envy you so much. Your sister must think equally of you, I'm sure.
LL

Aimster
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6 posted 2000-06-19 04:57 PM


~whiskey,
first off this poem was simply
beautiful! i have two younger sisters
who are my best friend as well. i am
so glad you have someone like this in
your life. sisterhood is an unbreakable
bond when shared with friendship.
take care.
amy  

"Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends."

"Fate exists but it can only take you so far,
Because once you're there
It's up to you to make it happen."




Cuddlez
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7 posted 2000-06-19 08:43 PM


I love this poem.. It describes me and my best friend (who is not related by blood) but we consider ourselves sisters, perfectly

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Jan
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8 posted 2000-06-19 09:24 PM


How lucky you are to be blessed with such a wonderful sister/sister relationship.  I am envious. Of you and your sister and your wonderful writing.
A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 2000-06-19 11:54 PM


I am close to my sister, your poem brought back alot of memories for me...lovely dedication!
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