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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-18 10:36 PM


Let the wind blow you here
          To me
Cause you will come willingly
           If
     Were meant to be
no second thoughts or guesses
          Cause
Second thoughts and guesses
           Ruin
         Eternity

[This message has been edited by Jeremiah Johnson (edited 06-18-2000).]

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whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278
Australia
1 posted 2000-06-19 10:46 AM


Very short but alot of meaning in your words   I agree with your last few lines I think if you think to much you ruin what could have been right    

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 06-19-2000).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-06-15 04:09 AM


Enjoyoed...James
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