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Jeremiah Johnson
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0 posted 2000-06-18 10:36 PM


  Blow free as natural air
For if you're created you blow
   In a told direction.

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-18 10:49 PM


So much said in so few words! Good job!

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



kaile
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2 posted 2000-06-25 07:29 PM


Jeremiah

this is the best poem i have read from you so far...this is so short and simple yet seemingly so deep, open-ended,containing layers for the reader to peel and figure out for himself....  

okay, my interpretation here:concept of Follow Your Heart!  will like to know your intention of writing this poem here

[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 06-25-2000).]

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