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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-06-18 05:07 PM


Gentle breeze caressing my lips,
spreading the news of what is to come,
I sit here completely lost,
rays of sun shower me with warmth,
smell of sweet earth fills my lungs,
The old tree at the edge of the forest is speaking,
from the tiny plants to the gigantic mountains are all listening with ease,
a tale of a man and his dream,
that is where the story began,
as I get lost in the moment,
no silence has ever been this majestic,
the presence of the surrounding heightens my senses,
I look upon my hand and what is it that I see,
reflection of heaven coming clearer and clearer,
gazing in amazement my hand closes like a withering flower,
reopening to let loose the guilt’s of the past,
closing my eyes I see what is really there,
angels all around singing in unison,
The ticklish hand of god flutters the leaves of tiny plants,
I pinch myself to realize that this dream is but a reality,
not wanting this moment to end I close my eyes forever,
I can hear the old tree still speaking of this man and his dream,
divine beings alike have come together here to share themselves,
The sky is flowing downward to join this gathering,
a circle is forming as all come to rest,
rest here and listen to the story of the man and his dream



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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Jeremiah Johnson
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1 posted 2000-06-18 05:33 PM


this is a great piece of work seems to take you through a good death going into heaven.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul



Cerenity
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2 posted 2000-06-18 10:24 PM


Hi Xeonox,

This was so beautiful and very insightful as well, thank you for sharing.

Love,  Cerenity

Xeonox
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3 posted 2000-07-24 02:05 AM


People like you inspire me so I thank you too.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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