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Corinne
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0 posted 2000-06-18 03:58 PM



Fishstory

Down along the coastal road,
one block from the briny sea,
rusting like gigantic tins,
untidy rows of canneries.

The lighthouse doesn’t stand tall
packed between two fisheries,
but there were profits to be made
processing fish in factories.

Sardine oil left town by rail,
with fishmeal by the ton,
new notions of conservation
wealthy capitalists did shun.

When the nineteen forties came,
their numbers down to none,
the legendary Cannery Row
had caught its final run.

Yet, its folklore cast its lure,
nostalgia draws the swarms,
over-fishing is still in style,
not heeding what history warns.

© 2000 Corinne Bailey




[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 06-18-2000).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2000-06-18 04:41 PM


Corinne,
You said allot with very few words. Good words, good point, good poem. *L*

Meadowmuse
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2 posted 2000-06-18 04:57 PM


I must agree with Seymour, Corinne...a masterfully told fish tale, to be sure, and interesting bit of history.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau



Corinne
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3 posted 2000-06-18 08:13 PM


Thank you Seymour and Meadowmuse!

Corinne


Parker
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4 posted 2000-06-19 10:04 AM


Something fishy going on around here...
Very well done as usual Corinne. We never learn, but corrections always occure, mother nature will take care of it problem.... oh dear that us.

Parker

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