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dreamy_eyes
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0 posted 2000-06-18 11:57 AM


Alcohol is one of the easiest drugs to obtain,
another is solvents like glue and butane,
both these make your nervous system decrease,
especially if the amount of drug is increased.

Downer drugs make you feel relaxed and calm,
but many drugs bring psychological and physical harm,
nasal columns collapse after sniffing has been abused,
many people lose their friends when they have refused.

When you have stopped taking, the temptation never goes away,
you want the crazy feeling you got from sniffing aerosol spray,
you try and fill the time you once used for smoking blow,
but you cant concentrate and the time just goes so slow.

You now buy the stuff in and sell it for double,
you are a dealer and now can get in worse trouble,
this is the only way to pay for your gear,
to get you back in your own world out of here.

by Debs  

© Copyright 2000 Debi - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-06-18 12:03 PM


Very well said, Debbie. I don't know what else I can say...

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
2 posted 2000-06-18 12:04 PM


this is a tough subject to write about, but you have written quite a poem here.

you're absolutely right about the feelings that are expressed here. it's like an unsurmountable hole that you can't get out of or help but dig. and the chilling part that the addict never figures out is that hole is their grave. i know about it. *caffeine pills*

reminds me of a poem i once wrote...

keep strivin'. everyone's got their demons.

We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

menage a demideux
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since 2000-05-11
Posts 32

3 posted 2000-06-18 12:08 PM


you have la hantise avec des drogues... eh?

i say, "you have the obsession with the drugs"

maybe you should consultation de recherche...???

trop de colle et marijuana peuvent faire à votre séjour de thème de poésie la même chose

er... to translation... too much glue and smoke can make poetic themes stay similar

pyro
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 12

4 posted 2000-06-18 12:35 PM


in the immortal words of marilyn manson
"it takes the drugs we take too make us fell so hollow, we love your face we'd really like to sell you"

marijuanas bad mmmmmmkay

i really liked the poem if you can't decode all the other rubbish i just wrote

pyro

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
5 posted 2000-06-18 01:24 PM


Serious Poem -- has good meter

I can't imagine anyone sniffing glue
or using aerosol spray cans ----

Makes you want to get into the psychological
problem and wonder where everything went
wrong --  

Got to stay away from drugs --it's poisonous
to the very soul of a person --

I have always told teens that _sure you
might want to go along with your peers
but you never know if you are going to
be the one that gets addicted. I believe
that drugs are a genetic thing -- If you
look to your relatives on both sides of
your genetic string -- you will know
for sure if you are in danger ---
without even trying any -

But, remember, there is always the chance
that you will be the one to have struggle
for the rest of your life - should you
take that step into the unreal world of
getting high

Alcoholic parents - grandparents, aunts,
uncles, cousins --can be a sure sign that
you don't want to touch any drug of any
kind.

Good issue

~netswan

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