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Open Poetry #8

For The Second Time

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2000-06-17 11:12 PM

For The Second Time

I looked in the mirror
today
and saw you
looking back;
saw the green
of your eyes,
your smile,
the wondeful glow
of your skin.
The mirror fogged
from the water
I'd run…
Oh God,
I've lost you again.

W. James Beard, Jr.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-06-17 11:46 PM

strong emotions and imagery
written well in a few perfect words...
softly haunting
take care JW
jm

Jan
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 114

2 posted 2000-06-17 11:55 PM

You have conveyed such a strong feeling in so few words. It's great.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 2000-06-18 12:10 PM

Wow.

Full of impact - just as I like them!

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