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Lorraine Nisbet
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA

0 posted 2000-06-17 09:07 PM




Faith

The sun is shining
the sky is blue,
somethings in the air
which does not ring true.

It seems like
everything is calm,
but in my heart
rings an alarm.

"Your dark angel
was by your side,
I chased him away
he will abide."

"Say your prayers
do not yield,
keep the faith
I will be your shield."

"I will be with you
to wipe away the sorrows,
I will be with you
for all tomorrows."




A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


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anomaly187
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US
1 posted 2000-06-17 09:14 PM


..it's all about keeping the faith..loved the poem.



"i lie in the soil and fertilize mushrooms
leaking out gas fumes are made into perfume.
you can't fire me because i already quit
throw me in the fi

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
2 posted 2000-06-17 10:55 PM


Oh this is sweet, Lorraine

~netswan

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 2000-06-18 12:38 PM


Your dark angel
was by your side,
I chased him away
he will abide."


that is gorgeous....

nice work!


Lorraine Nisbet
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA
4 posted 2000-06-18 06:15 PM



anomaly~
Thank you for reading.

netswan~
Thank you much.

Severn~
Thank you for your nice reply.

~Lorraine


A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
5 posted 2000-06-19 11:02 AM


A sweet poem here, Lorraine, KEEP THE FAITH....how I remember that Bon Jovi number...

Like this one for sure.
Regards, sudhir


Lorraine Nisbet
Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA
6 posted 2000-06-20 07:50 PM



Sudhir~
Thank you for your nice words!
I have 3 of Bon Jovi's CDs but no Keep the Faith.  Would you happen to know what CD this song is on?                        
~Lorraine




A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


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